I kept expecting Helvetica to make an appearance, none the less this was incredibly enteratining
This was great, I liked seeing how the animation became looser and more relaxed as the short went on, and how you don't need to know the characters for you to intermediately understand what they are like
Really great animation here, the character design detracted from it a bit though, but the dance scene was incredibly well done. Good job.
Thanks for watching and reviewing!
I liked the experience you were going for, but I felt at times it suffered as a game from the decision, the inability to adjust the in-game volume was a big one, and the amount of real time spent looking at the window to recharge happiness made the game a bit of a slog. You certainly nailed the experience through the tone of the game though
Very bad load time, i checked to make sure this was not the fault of my computer, the standard sprites used were okay, but the collision is annoying, especially in a game that revolves around precision. also pedestrians would never collide with my car, maybe that was something you forgot about
Your feedback will be taken into consideration, thank you.
Cool, I like the armor and body type of her character, it feels quite original. My only real gripe is the asymmetry of her face, her screen right side is rounder then it would be. Other then that all looks pretty sick, keep up the good work.
Neat, I like the simple composition. Careful though with mixing anti-aliased lines with aliased ones, it makes the sharper stuff stick out like a sore thumb and loos incomplete. Try and use similar brushes throughout for a more consistent feel. Also I understand using yellow to draw the eye, but that is not reflected in the lighting elsewhere in the composition, you can add yellow light to the other highlights for that to feel less unnatural. Overall interesting piece, keep practicing!
Thank you so much for the advice. I actually used Fresh Paint, the app, and it has limited brushes and such but hopefully I can learn to use what I have. I purposely added the yellow-green light to make it seem unnatural because the girl herself is not there. I hope to keep practicing and learning, any and all helpful criticism is welcomed. Thank you so much :)
Cool! Kinda muddy though, you should try defining your forms and adding to that for a more solid feel, if you want to keep the sketchy feel u can go over your edges with a brush set to clear afterwards for that nice rough feel
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